Csak mivel angol tudásom tényleg egyenlő a 0-val,
annyira de annyira büszke voltam magamra,
hogy végre, egyszer,
igen,
engem is megdicsértek.*-*
Bár nem tagadom kértem hozzá segítséget,
mégis csak az én ötleteim és fogalmazásom alapján készült.
a végeredmény pedig:
My birthday party
My birthday party was at night yesterday in our house, because my mum and my dad weren't at home.
A few days before the beginning of my birthday party, I went to the Supermarket, then I took a lot of drink forexample coca cola, seven-up and crips, cookies, biscuits. Me, my brother and my best fiend decorated our living room with balloons and lanterns. My friends come into our home at 10 o'clock and everyone got a gift.My best present to surprise guests Brad Pitt, who is my favorite actor.He brought a birthday's cake and a necklace,ring,bracelet, and a jewerly box.All night, We danced, ate and spoke a lot.We played the Twister games and swam on the basin.The event finished today dawn.
At the end I was very sleepy but this birthday party was the best thing of my life.
..ezek után felcsillant a remény,
hogy talán mégis sikerülni fog,
az a bizonyos érettségi..*-*
